Friday, February 26, 2016

Two Ways :)

How it works two ways
It either makes or breaks

Perfumed flowers rot and withered away giving stench
Warm embraces became sensations of strangulation
Whispered longings became nags
Promises became burdens holding them back
Everything got lost in the distance
When she saw the sun, he was seeing the stars
She seemed to be walking on a tightrope with silence being the staff that let her keep her centre of balance

Perfumed flowers became memories to be preserved between the pages
Warm embraces became layers of strong protection
Whispered longings turned the soul desperate for the flesh and the bone
Promises just a confirmation that nothing could go wrong no matter what
The distance just another dimension that time would end
The sun would visit daily and take her messages as he went along, the moon took her songs through the wind and delivered them to him
If they were separated by seven seas, there was no other distance she could cross more easily

PS -This was lying incomplete somewhere and as I tried to finish it, I realized that the original was supposed to be longer but my memory doesn't serve me well and I don't remember the lines anymore. :/ 

7 comments:

  1. YOU LISTEN TO ME VERY CAREFULLY MISS.

    Give parts of this writing to WordPorn and such sites.

    This is my favorite out of everything I have read in your blog (I have read them all)

    Every comparison is so thought-provoking and brilliant !!

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    1. Eeeeeee okaaayy :D
      Thaaaaank youuuu so much Purbaliiiiii. :D
      Do you know which sites accept submissions? :O

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  2. This is actually really good.
    One day when I'm famous, I'm going to copy this and pass this off as my own.

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    1. Hehehe. I like compliments. ^_^

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    2. Also, you were my 2100st! :D

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    3. The way you say it sounds like Barney making a list. :/

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